Wednesday, 15 October 2014

kawakawa pools

W.A.L.T put lots of detail in our writting
for a start what I done well I put lots of describing words and detail. What think I should do next time is make my writing. What we were doing was we were writing about the holidays. We done this because we thought everyone would like to hear about it. 

so I hope you enjoy

In the holidays we went to the Kawakawa pools. Lots of huge people were there I was terrified.So my cousin said “Oh look all the Kaikohe hori’s are here” then I said “ where from Kaikohe so you got rejected? Then my idiotic brother drowned me but of course he didn't he didn't even notice or recognize that he was drowning himself really. Soon and slow as he could do it, he pulled my togs down. It was so embarrassing so I dived under the deep side of the pool as deep as I could and fast as I could. And grabbed them then grabbed on the side of the pool I forgot that I was holding my togs. Suddenly someone dived under me......

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