Monday, 2 November 2015


Hi this my cyclone lusi that I like to share with you's.
We done this because our teacher thought we could do well with this and we did.
Why we did because it is a very good thing to write about.
What I done well was that I talked about what other peoples houses looked like not just our's.
What I need to do is put more sentences.
But I hope you enjoy.

On Saturday it was a stormy night. My tree was broken in half. I did not know if the other one was broken. I do not know, all I heard was whoosh and splash SPLASH.I was a tiny bit scared about cyclone Lusi because it was loud and windy and it rained all day.

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