Thursday, 3 November 2016


One day The fog was traveling through the town making it more terrifying when you go walking  onto the streets. Down the road a demolished damp building still stands and still moves as the wind blows down the road. By that house there lives a boy that's always happy and cheerful the kind of one that will take part for everything. One Halloween night he dressed in bloody sheets and held the reaper's scythe and holded the head of a pumpkin for his bag. Once he left the house the streets were filled with nothing but silence. He walked to each house in town but it seemed as no one was there but something caught the corner of his eye a man standing by the fence that needed help blood was dripping from his face and he was shaking like he was freezing suddenly his body disappeared into the fog. The boys heart was pumping he was just about faint  he was scared and had no choice but to spend the night with his friends they went to every single house in town but this time they answered and gave us treats they tasted sugary sweet and crunchie. when he got back home his bag was filled with all kind of streets as his eyes closed he said to himself “Halloween doesn't always have to be a scary thing”.

Friday, 21 October 2016

my weekends

On the weekend the clouds covered the sun and the rain poured down onto the ground causing everyone to keep indoors I traveled to my house to my nephews house so I can have some fun with them.Once I stepped into the room everyone had smiles on their faces looking like they were glad to see me.

The rain is pouring as the day gets colder my nephews call me down to the ground and so I felt excited and happy we turned the ps4 on and we played the game for a while so my stomach growled as loud as a wild lion.

So my brother brang some chips and as quick as a flash we munched them all in half a second. Then we had fish hot dogs and burgers after the feed my eyelids got heavy.

So i went to bed as soon as I closed my eyelids I thought to myself this was a grea time.

Friday, 14 October 2016

my holidays

My Holiday

On a warm sunny day the sun shines bright in the clear blue sky because this is a perfect time to spend time with my nephew at his 5th birthday party. My family and nephew was  there to I could see smiles on everyone's faces I could hear everyone's mouths laughing  joyfully everyone looked like they were having heaps of fun with there family. After a while I smelt the smell of food, the smell of food drawed me to a table with treats there was chicken nuggets chips drinks and more. Finally the birthday boy came along and so did the cake everyone had their eyes glued onto the cake The cake was chocolate brown with chocolate icing on top and my mouth watered and my stomach growled as loud as a roar of a wild lion. My sister called everyone up to the living room to come get some food. All the people in the room were glad that it was time to eat so once they got there food they had to eat outside. After the party was almost done we all went home and waved goodbye. The moon was out and I said to myself "I'm glad I got to spend time with my family".

Friday, 16 September 2016

In the morning we were greeted by this young lady called Kathy and dan the bee man. They told us important facts about bees did you know the queen bee lives 50x longer than a usual bee. After a while she told us some interesting words and told us the meaning of the  word for example pollination which means to transfer of pollen from the anther to the stigma of a plant. They told us some happy news and sad news they told us important information about bees and that we should not just squash them but help them save them because it would make new zealand a better place they make honey nectar they are always busy. Day after day  after day is just work work work so she told us that we should look after them. Not just for them to make honey for us because it will make us a better person. After the show she kindly gave us some seeds to plant in our backyard to help the bees and she kindly gave us some stickers and a slice of manuka slice then we waved her goodbye my favorite fact that she told me is that when there's another bee in their hive they kill it or chase it away so it is almost like the ultimate sacrifice so that’s what she told us and I’m sure everyone had a great time.  

Wednesday, 31 August 2016

The silver scissors

                     Title:The silver scissors

 I’m staring down at my desk the blades of the silver scissors,It’s blades As sharp as the point of a knight's sword Blue as the morning sky Shiny as the sparkling sea. They are a kitchen knife a blade and two o shaped eyes looking for someone to use them.the scissors cuts my page in half.

Thursday, 18 August 2016


I’ve arrived at the Olympics looking up at all the people staring down at us i’m trying to ignore by looking around at all the other challenging competitors ready to take on anything or anyone that’s in there ways. As the crowd cheers their family and friends I slam into a tall player scars covered his face and tattoos of fire up his leg and a golden medal wrapped tightly around his neck . All is quiet and it is time to line up. The wind is blowing softly onto my . Ive arrived at the pool everyone is staring down at me and all my emotions come back as I look down at all the other fit swimmers swimming swiftly through the water I start think if I have what it takes to win this I’m standing next to the water sparkling onto my face the scorching sun is shining onto my legs I stare at the man with the golden medal “I can’t be up against him I panicked”. 3..2..1 go everybody sawing through the water me and everyone else is giving it all we got. Suddenly everyone gets left behind and i’m close to the finish “i’m going to make it ” I screamed. But then it was him he was swimming as fast as you can run he sawed through the water until he we started to come a tie. I saw pieces of sparkling water fly into the air “I can’t lose I will not”. My body started to feel like I can swim forever my arms sawed through the water and my leg made splashes that were as big as a 3 story house.  Just a few more seconds 5 4 3 2 1 “ YES” I screamed all my effort was worth it. All my effort was worth it  3 hours later they announced the rewards. First the bronze and silver and finally gold I stood proudly and walked up to my reward the red hot blazing sun beated down on my back they placed the reward  onto my neck “I won I WON” I shouted. After the Olympics returning home happily without no worries at all.

Wednesday, 10 August 2016

Monday, 9 May 2016

Autumn leaves

W.A.L.T: visualize what is happening in the text.

Have you ever

 heard the sound

 of Autumn leaves

 falling down

Read and gold

yellow and brown

 they flutter softly

to the ground

Thursday, 14 April 2016

Feathery freands

On 13 of April we were did this it is how birds use there feet.

Monday, 11 April 2016

learning with matua brent

Yesterday with Matua Brent we have done some pretty cool stuff we made two way pictures it was awesome. The steps were hard but Matua Brent said to keep it simple, the picture the everything the steps are hard but I reckon you can do it.
step.1 draw your picture on the front of a A 4 paper.
step.2 when you your finished carefully use vivid to go over your picture.
step.3 after that get another A 4 piece of paper and draw the same picture
step.4 Then color both of the pictures different colors.
step.5 on one of the A 4 piece of  paper get a ruler using side ways measure every 5 cm and then draw a dot and then under that dot write 1 then 2 and 3 4 5  6 then rule lines that go up, do the same on the other side but instead of writing 123456 write a b c d e f.
step.6 cut down the lines on each paper
step.7 now sellotape 2 A 4 piece of papers together
step.8 now glue the cut up pieces  onto the paper you have sellotaped in this order starting at the right side of the paper A 1 B 2 C 3 D 4 E 5 F 6.
4th of October 2015

Popping candy

        Popping candy

            W.A.L.T: Describe using our senses

              I hear exploding popcorn. It sounds like . . . fireworks.
              I  smell a sweet scent. The smell is . . . beatifull
             I touch a sticky hard rock. The feeling is. . . krinckely
            I taste popping candy . . . The taste is sour and sweet

Friday, 1 April 2016


One Easter holiday the sun shone brighter than the moon. We don't celebrate Easter so we went to my sisters awesome house. It was fun we played the game for a a long time and watched funny TV shows. And we delicious chicken that tasted like juicy steak. I know we did not celebrate Easter but night was the best.
this is my writing 

Thursday, 17 March 2016


 W.A.L.T: Retell our mihi

                              OUR MIHI
Last week  we were  making something about our pepeha. It was this

we got handed a paper so we could color it in. And then we got handed another piece of paper and we had to write  ko te Ahuahu toku maunga. And other stuff and then we had to draw pictures of our family and myself. And then we had to color in the small pictures that were on  there. And that is what we done last week and hope you like my drawing.

Tuesday, 1 March 2016


 W.A.L.T: think deeply about text

Today with our class we were drawing our favorite part of the Lorax and why it was our  favorite part. This was my favorite part it was when the Once-ler came because it was when the trouble began. This is my picture I hope you like it.