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Tuesday, 14 June 2016

dont touch the chesse

10 comments:

  1. Hi Keanu great work but maybe next time you could add more punctuation.

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  2. hi keanu great story. But just think about putting in some full stops. It is funny.

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  3. good story keanu I liked the story very much =)

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  4. U need to make sure that all of your words that u are writing make sense OK keanu.

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  5. I loved your story and your picture that u put on there I will follow u on storybird =)

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  6. I loved your story and your picture that u put on there I will follow u on storybird =)

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  7. U need to make sure that all of your words that u are writing make sense OK keanu.

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  8. I liked your story because when you descried. The mouse like it went to war and it got it's ear shoot off. You for got to put full stops in your sentences keep up the good work Keanu

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  9. I liked your story because when you descried. The mouse like it went to war and it got it's ear shoot off. You for got to put full stops in your sentences keep up the good work Keanu

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  10. I liked your story bird writing and it shows me some inspiration on my storeys.
    my Favorited character is the mouse

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